Use Temporal Words for Event Order
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Carlos is writing about a class trip. Read his story: Carlos got on the bus. Carlos visited the museum. Carlos ate lunch in the park. Carlos rode the bus back to school. Which sentence is missing a temporal word to show event order more clearly?
AFTER lunch, Carlos rode the bus back to school.
FINALLY, Carlos rode the bus back to school.
FIRST, Carlos got on the bus.
Carlos visited the museum.
Explanation
This question tests 3rd grade narrative writing skill of using temporal words and phrases to signal event order (CCSS.W.3.3.c). Temporal words and phrases signal WHEN events happen and show the ORDER of events in a story. Key narrative temporal words: FIRST/At first (beginning), NEXT/Then/After that (continuing sequence), BEFORE/AFTER (time relationships), FINALLY/At last (ending). These differ from informative linking words (also, another) which connect facts, and opinion linking words (because, therefore) which connect reasons. Temporal words help readers follow the story sequence through time, making clear which event happens first, next, and last. In this scenario, Carlos's story includes multiple events in sequence, such as getting on the bus, visiting the museum, eating lunch, and riding back, and one sentence lacks a temporal word, leaving the order unclear. Choice B is correct because it identifies the sentence about visiting the museum as missing a temporal word. Specifically, without a word like THEN or NEXT, it's unclear when the visit happens relative to getting on the bus and the later events. This helps readers follow the story events in order and understand the timeline. Choice A has a temporal word (first) signaling the beginning, but the question asks for the missing one. This is common when students forget to signal time between events. This happens because students learn different linking words for different purposes (opinion, informative, narrative) and may confuse them, or may not understand that temporal words have specific positions (first for beginning, finally for ending). To help students use temporal words in narratives: Create Temporal Words Anchor Chart for STORIES: Beginning (First, At first, One day), Middle (Next, Then, After that, Soon, Later), Before/After (Before [event], After [event]), Ending (Finally, At last, In the end). Teach position: FIRST = beginning event, NEXT/THEN = continuing events, FINALLY = ending event. Distinguish from other linking words: NARRATIVE temporal (first, next, finally) vs INFORMATIVE linking (also, another) vs OPINION linking (because, therefore) — match word type to writing type. Practice sequencing: Give story events without temporal words, have students add appropriate temporal words. Model variety: Don't use THEN for every event; use First → Next → Then → Finally chain. Use timeline visual: draw line with events, add temporal words showing time relationships. Practice BEFORE/AFTER: 'Before school, she practiced. After school, she performed.' Teach common chains: First-Next-Then-Finally, One day-Later-At last, In the morning-After lunch-In the afternoon. Compare stories with/without temporal words to see clarity difference. Watch for: Using opinion words (because) or informative words (also) in narratives. Using FINALLY at beginning or FIRST at end. Missing temporal words between events. Overusing THEN repeatedly (vary: first, next, later, finally). Confusing temporal words for different writing types. Praise: 'You used FIRST to show the beginning event, NEXT for the middle, and FINALLY for the ending!'
Keisha is writing about a soccer game. Read her story: AT FIRST, Keisha felt nervous. She kicked the ball to her teammate. SOON, she started to have fun. IN THE END, her team shook hands with the other team. How do temporal words help readers understand Keisha’s story?
They describe what the characters look like.
They give reasons for Keisha’s choices.
They tell which events happen first, next, and last.
They add extra facts that are not part of the story.
Explanation
This question tests 3rd grade narrative writing skill of using temporal words and phrases to signal event order (CCSS.W.3.3.c). Temporal words and phrases signal WHEN events happen and show the ORDER of events in a story. Key narrative temporal words: FIRST/At first (beginning), NEXT/Then/After that (continuing sequence), BEFORE/AFTER (time relationships), FINALLY/At last (ending). These differ from informative linking words (also, another) which connect facts, and opinion linking words (because, therefore) which connect reasons. Temporal words help readers follow the story sequence through time, making clear which event happens first, next, and last. In this scenario, Keisha's story includes multiple events in sequence, such as feeling nervous, kicking the ball, having fun, and shaking hands, and the temporal words like AT FIRST, SOON, and IN THE END signal the order. Choice A is correct because it states that temporal words tell which events happen first, next, and last. Specifically, this explains how words like AT FIRST signal the beginning and IN THE END the conclusion, clarifying the sequence. This helps readers follow the story events in order and understand the timeline. Choice B suggests they give reasons (like because), which confuses temporal with opinion linking words. This is common when students confuse temporal words with linking words for other writing types. This happens because students learn different linking words for different purposes (opinion, informative, narrative) and may confuse them, or may not understand that temporal words have specific positions (first for beginning, finally for ending). To help students use temporal words in narratives: Create Temporal Words Anchor Chart for STORIES: Beginning (First, At first, One day), Middle (Next, Then, After that, Soon, Later), Before/After (Before [event], After [event]), Ending (Finally, At last, In the end). Teach position: FIRST = beginning event, NEXT/THEN = continuing events, FINALLY = ending event. Distinguish from other linking words: NARRATIVE temporal (first, next, finally) vs INFORMATIVE linking (also, another) vs OPINION linking (because, therefore) — match word type to writing type. Practice sequencing: Give story events without temporal words, have students add appropriate temporal words. Model variety: Don't use THEN for every event; use First → Next → Then → Finally chain. Use timeline visual: draw line with events, add temporal words showing time relationships. Practice BEFORE/AFTER: 'Before school, she practiced. After school, she performed.' Teach common chains: First-Next-Then-Finally, One day-Later-At last, In the morning-After lunch-In the afternoon. Compare stories with/without temporal words to see clarity difference. Watch for: Using opinion words (because) or informative words (also) in narratives. Using FINALLY at beginning or FIRST at end. Missing temporal words between events. Overusing THEN repeatedly (vary: first, next, later, finally). Confusing temporal words for different writing types. Praise: 'You used FIRST to show the beginning event, NEXT for the middle, and FINALLY for the ending!'
Read Sofia’s story: FIRST, Sofia put her lunch in her cubby. NEXT, she went to art class. THEN, she washed her hands. FINALLY, she ate lunch with Maya. Which word tells readers that Sofia ate lunch at the end of the events?
First
Finally
Then
Next
Explanation
This question tests 3rd grade narrative writing skill of using temporal words and phrases to signal event order (CCSS.W.3.3.c). Temporal words and phrases signal WHEN events happen and show the ORDER of events in a story. Key narrative temporal words: FIRST/At first (beginning), NEXT/Then/After that (continuing sequence), BEFORE/AFTER (time relationships), FINALLY/At last (ending). These differ from informative linking words (also, another) which connect facts, and opinion linking words (because, therefore) which connect reasons. In this scenario, Sofia's story includes a clear sequence with temporal words already in place: FIRST (cubby), NEXT (art class), THEN (washing hands), FINALLY (eating lunch). The question asks which word tells readers that eating lunch happened at the end. Choice C (Finally) is correct because FINALLY signals the conclusion or last event in a sequence. Specifically, FINALLY shows that eating lunch with Maya was the last thing that happened after all the other events. This helps readers understand the complete sequence ended with lunch. Choices A (Next) and D (Then) are middle-sequence words that continue events but don't signal an ending. Choice B (First) signals a beginning, not an ending, and would contradict the story's order. This is common when students think any temporal word works anywhere without understanding that each has a specific position in the sequence. To help students use temporal words in narratives: Create Temporal Words Anchor Chart for STORIES: Beginning (First, At first, One day), Middle (Next, Then, After that, Soon, Later), Before/After (Before [event], After [event]), Ending (Finally, At last, In the end). Teach position: FIRST = beginning event, NEXT/THEN = continuing events, FINALLY = ending event. Model variety: Don't use THEN for every event; use First → Next → Then → Finally chain. Practice identifying: Give students stories with temporal words and have them identify which words show beginning, middle, and end. Compare stories with/without temporal words to see clarity difference. Praise: 'You correctly identified FINALLY as the word that shows the last event!'
Keisha is writing about a rainy-day recess. Read her story: At the start of recess, Keisha chose a board game. She played for fifteen minutes. ___, the teacher said it was time to clean up. In the end, Keisha put the game back on the shelf.
Which temporal word should Keisha use in the blank to show that this event happened next?
Because
Next
Before
Also
Explanation
This question tests 3rd grade narrative writing skill of using temporal words and phrases to signal event order (CCSS.W.3.3.c). Temporal words and phrases signal WHEN events happen and show the ORDER of events in a story. Key narrative temporal words: FIRST/At first (beginning), NEXT/Then/After that (continuing sequence), BEFORE/AFTER (time relationships), FINALLY/At last (ending). These differ from informative linking words (also, another) which connect facts, and opinion linking words (because, therefore) which connect reasons. In this scenario, Keisha's story about rainy-day recess needs a temporal word to show what happened after playing for fifteen minutes. Choice C (Next) is correct because it uses NEXT to show that the teacher's announcement happened as the following event in the sequence. Specifically, NEXT signals the progression from playing the game to cleanup time, maintaining clear chronological order. Choice A (Also) is an informative linking word for adding facts not showing sequence, Choice B (Because) is an opinion linking word for giving reasons not time order, and Choice D (Before) would create illogical order since the teacher can't say cleanup time before she plays. This is common when students confuse different types of linking words or don't match temporal words to narrative writing. To help students use temporal words in narratives: Create clear distinctions between word types - NARRATIVE uses time words (first, next, then), INFORMATIVE uses fact words (also, another), OPINION uses reason words (because, therefore). Practice identifying which word type matches which writing purpose. Use sentence frames to practice: 'She played. ___, the teacher said cleanup time.' Only temporal words make sense.
Read Maya’s story: In the morning, Maya started a puzzle. She worked for ten minutes. ___, her brother brought the last piece. Finally, they finished the puzzle together.
Which temporal word best fits in the blank to show what happened next?
Because
Another
Then
Before
Explanation
This question tests 3rd grade narrative writing skill of using temporal words and phrases to signal event order (CCSS.W.3.3.c). Temporal words and phrases signal WHEN events happen and show the ORDER of events in a story. Key narrative temporal words: FIRST/At first (beginning), NEXT/Then/After that (continuing sequence), BEFORE/AFTER (time relationships), FINALLY/At last (ending). These differ from informative linking words (also, another) which connect facts, and opinion linking words (because, therefore) which connect reasons. In this scenario, Maya's story shows a sequence where she works on a puzzle, and the blank needs a temporal word to show what happened after working for ten minutes. Choice A (Then) is correct because it uses THEN to show the next event in the sequence. Specifically, THEN signals that her brother bringing the piece happened after she worked on the puzzle, maintaining clear story order. Choice B (Another) is an informative linking word for adding facts not showing time, Choice C (Because) is an opinion linking word for giving reasons not sequence, and Choice D (Before) would create illogical order since the brother can't bring the piece before she starts working. This is common when students confuse different types of linking words or don't understand that temporal words must create logical time order. To help students use temporal words in narratives: Distinguish from other linking words: NARRATIVE temporal (first, next, then, finally) vs INFORMATIVE linking (also, another) vs OPINION linking (because, therefore). Practice choosing temporal words that make logical sense: read the events before and after to ensure proper sequence. Create anchor charts showing which words belong to which writing type.
Read Emma’s story: ONE MORNING, Emma noticed her library book was missing. She looked in her backpack. She checked her desk. She asked Jamal to help. They found the book by the reading rug. Which temporal word best shows that the third event happened after the second event?
NEXT
ALSO
BEFORE
BECAUSE
Explanation
This question tests 3rd grade narrative writing skill of using temporal words and phrases to signal event order (CCSS.W.3.3.c). Temporal words and phrases signal WHEN events happen and show the ORDER of events in a story. Key narrative temporal words: FIRST/At first (beginning), NEXT/Then/After that (continuing sequence), BEFORE/AFTER (time relationships), FINALLY/At last (ending). These differ from informative linking words (also, another) which connect facts, and opinion linking words (because, therefore) which connect reasons. Temporal words help readers follow the story sequence through time, making clear which event happens first, next, and last. In this scenario, Emma's story includes multiple events in sequence: noticing the book missing one morning, looking in her backpack, checking her desk, asking for help, and finding the book. The choice of temporal word 'NEXT' makes the sequence clear by signaling the third event after the second. Choice B is correct because it uses NEXT to show the event after the previous one. Specifically, 'NEXT' clarifies when checking the desk happens relative to looking in the backpack, helping readers follow the story events in order and understand the timeline. Choice C uses an opinion linking word (because) instead of temporal, leaving the order unclear. This is common when students confuse temporal words with linking words for other writing types. This happens because students learn different linking words for different purposes (opinion, informative, narrative) and may confuse them, or may not understand that temporal words have specific positions (first for beginning, finally for ending). To help students use temporal words in narratives: Create Temporal Words Anchor Chart for STORIES: Beginning (First, At first, One day), Middle (Next, Then, After that, Soon, Later), Before/After (Before [event], After [event]), Ending (Finally, At last, In the end). Teach position: FIRST = beginning event, NEXT/THEN = continuing events, FINALLY = ending event. Distinguish from other linking words: NARRATIVE temporal (first, next, finally) vs INFORMATIVE linking (also, another) vs OPINION linking (because, therefore) — match word type to writing type. Practice sequencing: Give story events without temporal words, have students add appropriate temporal words. Model variety: Don't use THEN for every event; use First → Next → Then → Finally chain. Use timeline visual: draw line with events, add temporal words showing time relationships. Practice BEFORE/AFTER: 'Before school, she practiced. After school, she performed.' Teach common chains: First-Next-Then-Finally, One day-Later-At last, In the morning-After lunch-In the afternoon. Compare stories with/without temporal words to see clarity difference. Watch for: Using opinion words (because) or informative words (also) in narratives. Using FINALLY at beginning or FIRST at end. Missing temporal words between events. Overusing THEN repeatedly (vary: first, next, later, finally). Confusing temporal words for different writing types. Praise: 'You used FIRST to show the beginning event, NEXT for the middle, and FINALLY for the ending!'
Read Marcus’s story: Marcus packed his lunch. AFTER he zipped his backpack, he ran to the bus stop. BEFORE the bus arrived, he waved to his friend. Which sentence uses a temporal word to signal when the event happened?
After he zipped his backpack, he ran to the bus stop.
Marcus packed his lunch.
He waved to his friend, also.
He ran to the bus stop because he was late.
Explanation
This question tests 3rd grade narrative writing skill of using temporal words and phrases to signal event order (CCSS.W.3.3.c). Temporal words and phrases signal WHEN events happen and show the ORDER of events in a story. Key narrative temporal words: FIRST/At first (beginning), NEXT/Then/After that (continuing sequence), BEFORE/AFTER (time relationships), FINALLY/At last (ending). These differ from informative linking words (also, another) which connect facts, and opinion linking words (because, therefore) which connect reasons. Temporal words help readers follow the story sequence through time, making clear which event happens first, next, and last. In this scenario, Marcus's story includes multiple events in sequence: packing lunch, zipping backpack then running to the bus stop, and waving to a friend before the bus arrives. The temporal word 'AFTER' signals when the running event happens in relation to zipping the backpack. Choice B is correct because it uses AFTER to show time relationship. Specifically, 'AFTER' clarifies when running to the bus stop happens relative to zipping the backpack, helping readers follow the story events in order and understand the timeline. Choice C uses an opinion linking word (because) instead of temporal. This is common when students confuse temporal words with linking words for other writing types. This happens because students learn different linking words for different purposes (opinion, informative, narrative) and may confuse them, or may not understand that temporal words have specific positions (first for beginning, finally for ending). To help students use temporal words in narratives: Create Temporal Words Anchor Chart for STORIES: Beginning (First, At first, One day), Middle (Next, Then, After that, Soon, Later), Before/After (Before [event], After [event]), Ending (Finally, At last, In the end). Teach position: FIRST = beginning event, NEXT/THEN = continuing events, FINALLY = ending event. Distinguish from other linking words: NARRATIVE temporal (first, next, finally) vs INFORMATIVE linking (also, another) vs OPINION linking (because, therefore) — match word type to writing type. Practice sequencing: Give story events without temporal words, have students add appropriate temporal words. Model variety: Don't use THEN for every event; use First → Next → Then → Finally chain. Use timeline visual: draw line with events, add temporal words showing time relationships. Practice BEFORE/AFTER: 'Before school, she practiced. After school, she performed.' Teach common chains: First-Next-Then-Finally, One day-Later-At last, In the morning-After lunch-In the afternoon. Compare stories with/without temporal words to see clarity difference. Watch for: Using opinion words (because) or informative words (also) in narratives. Using FINALLY at beginning or FIRST at end. Missing temporal words between events. Overusing THEN repeatedly (vary: first, next, later, finally). Confusing temporal words for different writing types. Praise: 'You used FIRST to show the beginning event, NEXT for the middle, and FINALLY for the ending!'
Read Maya’s story: IN THE AFTERNOON, Maya started a puzzle. FOR TEN MINUTES, she searched for corner pieces. THEN, her brother brought more pieces. AT LAST, they finished the puzzle. Which temporal phrase tells how long an event lasted?
THEN
AT LAST
FOR TEN MINUTES
IN THE AFTERNOON
Explanation
This question tests 3rd grade narrative writing skill of using temporal words and phrases to signal event order (CCSS.W.3.3.c). Temporal words and phrases signal WHEN events happen and show the ORDER of events in a story. Key narrative temporal words: FIRST/At first (beginning), NEXT/Then/After that (continuing sequence), BEFORE/AFTER (time relationships), FINALLY/At last (ending). These differ from informative linking words (also, another) which connect facts, and opinion linking words (because, therefore) which connect reasons. Temporal words help readers follow the story sequence through time, making clear which event happens first, next, and last. In this scenario, Maya's story includes multiple events in sequence: starting a puzzle in the afternoon, searching for corner pieces for ten minutes, her brother bringing more pieces then, and finishing at last. The temporal phrase 'FOR TEN MINUTES' signals how long the searching event lasted in the sequence. Choice B is correct because it uses FOR TEN MINUTES to show duration, a type of temporal phrase. Specifically, 'FOR TEN MINUTES' clarifies how long the searching happens within the story timeline, helping readers follow the story events in order and understand the timeline. Choice A uses a temporal phrase but for when, not duration, which is too vague for the question's focus. This is common when students forget to signal time between events. This happens because students learn different linking words for different purposes (opinion, informative, narrative) and may confuse them, or may not understand that temporal words have specific positions (first for beginning, finally for ending). To help students use temporal words in narratives: Create Temporal Words Anchor Chart for STORIES: Beginning (First, At first, One day), Middle (Next, Then, After that, Soon, Later), Before/After (Before [event], After [event]), Ending (Finally, At last, In the end). Teach position: FIRST = beginning event, NEXT/THEN = continuing events, FINALLY = ending event. Distinguish from other linking words: NARRATIVE temporal (first, next, finally) vs INFORMATIVE linking (also, another) vs OPINION linking (because, therefore) — match word type to writing type. Practice sequencing: Give story events without temporal words, have students add appropriate temporal words. Model variety: Don't use THEN for every event; use First → Next → Then → Finally chain. Use timeline visual: draw line with events, add temporal words showing time relationships. Practice BEFORE/AFTER: 'Before school, she practiced. After school, she performed.' Teach common chains: First-Next-Then-Finally, One day-Later-At last, In the morning-After lunch-In the afternoon. Compare stories with/without temporal words to see clarity difference. Watch for: Using opinion words (because) or informative words (also) in narratives. Using FINALLY at beginning or FIRST at end. Missing temporal words between events. Overusing THEN repeatedly (vary: first, next, later, finally). Confusing temporal words for different writing types. Praise: 'You used FIRST to show the beginning event, NEXT for the middle, and FINALLY for the ending!'
Yuki is writing a story about losing a bracelet. Which sentence correctly uses a temporal word to signal event order in the story?
Yuki looked under the desk BECAUSE she checked the playground.
FINALLY, Yuki started looking for her bracelet.
NEXT, Yuki checked the playground after she looked under the desk.
Yuki looked under the desk. She asked for help.
Explanation
This question tests 3rd grade narrative writing skill of using temporal words and phrases to signal event order (CCSS.W.3.3.c). Temporal words and phrases signal WHEN events happen and show the ORDER of events in a story. Key narrative temporal words: FIRST/At first (beginning), NEXT/Then/After that (continuing sequence), BEFORE/AFTER (time relationships), FINALLY/At last (ending). These differ from informative linking words (also, another) which connect facts, and opinion linking words (because, therefore) which connect reasons. Temporal words help readers follow the story sequence through time, making clear which event happens first, next, and last. In this scenario, Yuki's story includes multiple events in sequence about losing a bracelet, such as looking under the desk and checking the playground. The temporal words 'NEXT' and 'after' make the sequence clear by signaling order. Choice D is correct because it uses NEXT to show continuing sequence and after for time relationship. Specifically, 'NEXT ... after' clarifies when checking the playground happens relative to looking under the desk, helping readers follow the story events in order and understand the timeline. Choice B has no temporal word, leaving sequence unclear. This is common when students forget to signal time between events. This happens because students learn different linking words for different purposes (opinion, informative, narrative) and may confuse them, or may not understand that temporal words have specific positions (first for beginning, finally for ending). To help students use temporal words in narratives: Create Temporal Words Anchor Chart for STORIES: Beginning (First, At first, One day), Middle (Next, Then, After that, Soon, Later), Before/After (Before [event], After [event]), Ending (Finally, At last, In the end). Teach position: FIRST = beginning event, NEXT/THEN = continuing events, FINALLY = ending event. Distinguish from other linking words: NARRATIVE temporal (first, next, finally) vs INFORMATIVE linking (also, another) vs OPINION linking (because, therefore) — match word type to writing type. Practice sequencing: Give story events without temporal words, have students add appropriate temporal words. Model variety: Don't use THEN for every event; use First → Next → Then → Finally chain. Use timeline visual: draw line with events, add temporal words showing time relationships. Practice BEFORE/AFTER: 'Before school, she practiced. After school, she performed.' Teach common chains: First-Next-Then-Finally, One day-Later-At last, In the morning-After lunch-In the afternoon. Compare stories with/without temporal words to see clarity difference. Watch for: Using opinion words (because) or informative words (also) in narratives. Using FINALLY at beginning or FIRST at end. Missing temporal words between events. Overusing THEN repeatedly (vary: first, next, later, finally). Confusing temporal words for different writing types. Praise: 'You used FIRST to show the beginning event, NEXT for the middle, and FINALLY for the ending!'
Read Jamal’s story: FIRST, Jamal filled a bucket with water. NEXT, he carried it to the garden. ___, he watered the tomatoes. FINALLY, he put the bucket away. Which temporal word should go in the blank to show the next event in order?
ALSO
BEFORE
THEN
BECAUSE
Explanation
This question tests 3rd grade narrative writing skill of using temporal words and phrases to signal event order (CCSS.W.3.3.c). Temporal words and phrases signal WHEN events happen and show the ORDER of events in a story. Key narrative temporal words: FIRST/At first (beginning), NEXT/Then/After that (continuing sequence), BEFORE/AFTER (time relationships), FINALLY/At last (ending). These differ from informative linking words (also, another) which connect facts, and opinion linking words (because, therefore) which connect reasons. Temporal words help readers follow the story sequence through time, making clear which event happens first, next, and last. In this scenario, Jamal's story includes multiple events in sequence: filling the bucket first, carrying it next, watering the tomatoes, and putting the bucket away finally. The temporal word 'THEN' signals when the watering event happens in the sequence. Choice A is correct because it uses THEN to show the event after the previous one. Specifically, 'THEN' clarifies when watering the tomatoes happens relative to carrying the bucket, helping readers follow the story events in order and understand the timeline. Choice B uses the wrong temporal word for position (before would reverse the order). This is common when students think any order word works anywhere. This happens because students learn different linking words for different purposes (opinion, informative, narrative) and may confuse them, or may not understand that temporal words have specific positions (first for beginning, finally for ending). To help students use temporal words in narratives: Create Temporal Words Anchor Chart for STORIES: Beginning (First, At first, One day), Middle (Next, Then, After that, Soon, Later), Before/After (Before [event], After [event]), Ending (Finally, At last, In the end). Teach position: FIRST = beginning event, NEXT/THEN = continuing events, FINALLY = ending event. Distinguish from other linking words: NARRATIVE temporal (first, next, finally) vs INFORMATIVE linking (also, another) vs OPINION linking (because, therefore) — match word type to writing type. Practice sequencing: Give story events without temporal words, have students add appropriate temporal words. Model variety: Don't use THEN for every event; use First → Next → Then → Finally chain. Use timeline visual: draw line with events, add temporal words showing time relationships. Practice BEFORE/AFTER: 'Before school, she practiced. After school, she performed.' Teach common chains: First-Next-Then-Finally, One day-Later-At last, In the morning-After lunch-In the afternoon. Compare stories with/without temporal words to see clarity difference. Watch for: Using opinion words (because) or informative words (also) in narratives. Using FINALLY at beginning or FIRST at end. Missing temporal words between events. Overusing THEN repeatedly (vary: first, next, later, finally). Confusing temporal words for different writing types. Praise: 'You used FIRST to show the beginning event, NEXT for the middle, and FINALLY for the ending!'