Use Transitions to Create Cohesion
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7th Grade ELA › Use Transitions to Create Cohesion
A student is comparing two ways animals stay warm. Select the transition that best shows comparison.
“Penguins huddle together to conserve heat in cold weather. ________, wolves may sleep close to one another during winter storms.”
Therefore,
Similarly,
Afterward,
In contrast,
Explanation
This question asks for a transition showing comparison—highlighting similarities between two things. The sentences describe two similar behaviors: penguins huddling and wolves sleeping close together, both for warmth. "Similarly" (A) is the correct answer because it signals that wolves behave in a comparable way to penguins. "Therefore" shows cause and effect, "In contrast" shows differences, and "Afterward" shows time sequence. Comparison transitions like "Similarly," "Likewise," and "In the same way" help readers recognize when the writer is pointing out similarities between different examples in informational writing.
Read the informational sentences.
"A desert may look empty at first. However, many deserts contain a wide variety of plants and animals that are adapted to dry conditions."
What relationship does the transition However signal?
An example that defines a term
Addition of another supporting point
A contrast between expectations and reality
A chronological sequence of steps
Explanation
The transition "However" signals a contrast between what appears to be true (deserts look empty) and what is actually true (deserts contain many plants and animals). This creates a contrast between initial expectations or appearances and the surprising reality. The transition helps readers understand that the second sentence contradicts or goes against what the first sentence might lead them to believe.
A student is explaining why some cities experience more air pollution on hot days. Choose the transition that best shows cause and effect.
“Hot sunlight can speed up chemical reactions between car exhaust and other gases. ________, ground-level ozone can form, which makes the air harder to breathe.”
In contrast,
Meanwhile,
Consequently,
For instance,
Explanation
This question requires a transition that shows cause and effect—how one event leads to another. The first sentence explains that hot sunlight speeds up chemical reactions, and the second sentence needs to show what happens as a result. "Consequently" (C) is correct because it clearly indicates that ground-level ozone forming is a consequence or result of the chemical reactions. "In contrast" shows opposition, "For instance" introduces an example, and "Meanwhile" shows simultaneous events. Cause-and-effect transitions like "Consequently," "Therefore," "As a result," and "Thus" help readers understand how one fact leads to another in informational texts.
A student is revising an informational paragraph about renewable energy. Which revision uses transitions to create the best cohesion?
Original:
"Solar panels make electricity from sunlight. Wind turbines make electricity from moving air. Hydroelectric dams make electricity from flowing water."
Choose the best revision:
"Solar panels make electricity from sunlight. Also wind turbines make electricity from moving air. Also hydroelectric dams make electricity from flowing water."
"Solar panels make electricity from sunlight. In addition, wind turbines make electricity from moving air. Finally, hydroelectric dams make electricity from flowing water."
"Solar panels make electricity from sunlight. However, wind turbines make electricity from moving air. Therefore, hydroelectric dams make electricity from flowing water."
"Solar panels make electricity from sunlight. Because wind turbines make electricity from moving air. Hydroelectric dams make electricity from flowing water."
Explanation
The original paragraph lists three types of renewable energy without showing how they relate to each other. Option C uses the best transitions to create cohesion: "In addition" shows that wind turbines are another example of renewable energy alongside solar panels, and "Finally" indicates that hydroelectric dams complete the list. This creates a smooth flow that helps readers understand these are all examples of the same category. Option A repeats "Also" too much, Option B uses illogical transitions ("However" suggests contrast and "Therefore" suggests cause/effect where none exist), and Option D creates sentence fragments with "Because." The varied transitions in Option C effectively connect the related ideas.
A student is writing about renewable and nonrenewable resources. Which transition best shows contrast?
“Wind energy can be replenished naturally in a short time. ________, coal takes millions of years to form and can run out.”
In contrast,
For example,
In addition,
Likewise,
Explanation
This question requires a transition that shows contrast—highlighting differences between two things. The sentences compare wind energy (renewable) with coal (nonrenewable), emphasizing their opposite characteristics. "In contrast" (D) is correct because it clearly signals the difference between quickly replenished wind energy and slowly forming coal. "For example" introduces illustrations, "Likewise" shows similarity, and "In addition" adds information without showing contrast. Contrast transitions like "In contrast," "However," "On the other hand," and "Unlike" help readers understand when the writer is showing differences between concepts in informational texts.
A student is revising an informational paragraph about the benefits of exercise.
"Regular exercise strengthens the heart. It improves lung capacity. It can also reduce stress."
Which revision uses transitions to clearly show addition and create smoother flow?
"Regular exercise strengthens the heart. For example, it improves lung capacity. Similarly, it can also reduce stress."
"Regular exercise strengthens the heart. Additionally, it improves lung capacity. Furthermore, it can reduce stress."
"Regular exercise strengthens the heart. Because it improves lung capacity, it can also reduce stress."
"Regular exercise strengthens the heart. In contrast, it improves lung capacity. Finally, it can also reduce stress."
Explanation
The original paragraph lists three benefits of exercise without transitions, making it choppy. Option C uses "Additionally" and "Furthermore" to clearly show that each benefit is being added to the list, creating smooth flow and showing the relationship of addition. Option A incorrectly uses "In contrast" (showing opposition when listing similar benefits), B misuses cause-and-effect structure, and D misuses example transitions for what are actually separate benefits.
A student wrote this informational paragraph about studying effectively:
"First, choose a quiet place to work. Then, turn off notifications on your phone. Then, break big assignments into smaller tasks. Then, take short breaks to stay focused."
Which evaluation best describes the transitions in this paragraph?
The transitions are repetitive; using a mix like "Next," "Afterward," and "Finally" would improve cohesion.
The transitions are varied and clearly show cause and effect.
The transitions are too informal; removing them would make the paragraph clearer.
The transitions mainly show contrast, which is the best choice for explaining study steps.
Explanation
The paragraph uses "First" to begin, followed by "Then" repeated three times for the remaining steps. While the transitions do show sequence appropriately, the repetition of "Then" makes the writing monotonous and less engaging. Option B correctly identifies this issue and suggests improvement through varied transitions like "Next," "Afterward," and "Finally." This variety would maintain the sequential relationship while creating better flow and cohesion. The transitions are not showing cause and effect (A), removing them would make the sequence unclear (C), and they show sequence not contrast (D). Varying sequential transitions is an important skill for creating engaging, cohesive informational writing.
Read the informational sentences.
"Bats are mammals that use echolocation to find insects in the dark. Similarly, dolphins use echolocation to navigate and locate prey underwater."
What does the transition Similarly accomplish in this passage?
It signals a contrast between two ideas.
It introduces a step in a process.
It highlights a similarity between two animals.
It shows a cause-and-effect relationship.
Explanation
The transition "Similarly" connects two sentences about different animals (bats and dolphins) that share a common trait—they both use echolocation. This transition highlights the similarity between how these two different animals navigate and find food using the same biological technique. It doesn't show sequence, cause-and-effect, or contrast; instead, it draws a parallel between two examples that share a common characteristic.
A student wrote this informational paragraph about renewable energy, but the ideas feel choppy.
"Solar panels create electricity from sunlight. Wind turbines create electricity from moving air. Both reduce air pollution."
Which revision uses the best transitions to create cohesion and clarify relationships among ideas?
"Solar panels create electricity from sunlight. For instance, wind turbines create electricity from moving air. Both reduce air pollution."
"Solar panels create electricity from sunlight, and wind turbines create electricity from moving air, and both reduce air pollution."
"Solar panels create electricity from sunlight. Similarly, wind turbines create electricity from moving air. As a result, both reduce air pollution."
"Solar panels create electricity from sunlight. However, wind turbines create electricity from moving air. Both reduce air pollution."
Explanation
The original paragraph lacks transitions, making it feel choppy and disconnected. Option C uses the best transitions to create cohesion: "Similarly" shows that wind turbines are like solar panels in creating clean electricity, and "As a result" shows the cause-and-effect relationship between using these technologies and reducing pollution. Option A has no transitions, B incorrectly uses "However" (showing contrast when there isn't one), and D misuses "For instance" (wind turbines aren't an example of solar panels).
A student is checking whether an informational paragraph uses transitions effectively.
"First, scientists collect water samples from a river. Then, they test the samples for chemicals. Then, they record the results. Then, they share the data with the community."
Which evaluation best explains how the transitions affect cohesion?
The paragraph uses varied transitions that show different relationships, so the flow is strong.
The paragraph does not need transitions because the topic is scientific.
The paragraph uses the same transition repeatedly; adding varied sequence transitions (like "Next" or "Afterward") would improve cohesion.
The paragraph should replace sequence transitions with contrast transitions to make the steps clearer.
Explanation
The paragraph uses "Then" three times in a row after starting with "First," which creates repetitive and monotonous flow. While the transitions do show sequence correctly, using the same transition repeatedly weakens cohesion and makes the writing less engaging. The evaluation in option B correctly identifies this problem and suggests using varied sequence transitions like "Next" or "Afterward" to improve the flow while maintaining the chronological relationship between steps.