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Example Question #13 : Common Core: 11th Grade English Language Arts
Adapted from “Federalist No.19” in The Federalist Papers by Alexander Hamilton and James Madison (1788)
Among the confederacies of antiquity, the most considerable was that of the Grecian republics, associated under the Amphictyonic council. From the best accounts transmitted of this celebrated institution, it bore a very instructive analogy to the present Confederation of the American States. The members retained the character of independent and sovereign states, and had equal votes in the federal council. This council had a general authority to propose and resolve whatever it judged necessary for the common welfare of Greece; to declare and carry on war; to decide, in the last resort, all controversies between the members; to fine the aggressing party; to employ the whole force of the confederacy against the disobedient; and to admit new members.
The Amphictyons were the guardians of religion, and of the immense riches belonging to the temple of Delphos, where they had the right of jurisdiction in controversies between the inhabitants and those who came to consult the oracle. As a further provision for the efficacy of the federal powers, they took an oath mutually to defend and protect the united cities, to punish the violators of this oath, and to inflict vengeance on sacrilegious despoilers of the temple.
In theory, and upon paper, this apparatus of powers seems amply sufficient for all general purposes. In several material instances, they exceed the powers enumerated in the Articles of Confederation. The Amphictyons had in their hands the superstition of the times, one of the principal engines by which government was then maintained; they had a declared authority to use coercion against refractory cities, and were bound by oath to exert this authority on the necessary occasions.
Very different, nevertheless, was the experiment from the theory. The powers, like those of the present Congress, were administered by deputies appointed wholly by the cities in their political capacities, and exercised over them in the same capacities. Hence the weakness, the disorders, and finally the destruction of the confederacy. The more powerful members, instead of being kept in awe and subordination, tyrannized successively over all the rest. Athens, as we learn from Demosthenes, was the arbiter of Greece seventy-three years. The Lacedaemonians next governed it twenty-nine years; at a subsequent period, after the battle of Leuctra, the Thebans had their turn of domination. It happened but too often, according to Plutarch, that the deputies of the strongest cities awed and corrupted those of the weaker; and that judgment went in favor of the most powerful party. Even in the midst of defensive and dangerous wars with Persia and Macedon, the members never acted in concert, and were, more or fewer of them, eternally the dupes or the hirelings of the common enemy. The intervals of foreign war were filled up by domestic vicissitudes, convulsions, and carnage.
After the conclusion of the war with Xerxes, it appears that the Lacedaemonians required that a number of the cities should be turned out of the confederacy for the unfaithful part they had acted. The Athenians, finding that the Lacedaemonians would lose fewer partisans by such a measure than themselves, and would become masters of the public deliberations, vigorously opposed and defeated the attempt. This piece of history proves at once the inefficiency of the union, the ambition and jealousy of its most powerful members, and the dependent and degraded condition of the rest. The smaller members, though entitled by the theory of their system to revolve in equal pride and majesty around the common center, had become, in fact, satellites of the orbs of primary magnitude.
Had the Greeks, says the Abbe Milot, been as wise as they were courageous, they would have been admonished by experience of the necessity of a closer union, and would have availed themselves of the peace which followed their success against the Persian arms to establish such a reformation. Instead of this obvious policy, Athens and Sparta, inflated with the victories and the glory they had acquired, became first rivals and then enemies, and did each other infinitely more mischief than they had suffered from Xerxes. Their mutual jealousies, fears, hatreds, and injuries ended in the celebrated Peloponnesian war, which itself ended in the ruin and slavery of the Athenians who had begun it.
What is the primary argument made in this passage?
Greek politicians were different in character than American politicians, and so America may hope for a much brighter experience than that of the Greek confederacy
Confederacies are always and inevitably going to fail
The lack of peace and unity among the confederacies of Greece provides evidence to support the founding of a strong, centralized union between the American states
The Greeks were their own worst enemies, and in order to succeed as a nation, America must avoid the greed and corruption that marred ancient Greece
The lack of peace and unity among the confederacies of Greece provides evidence to support the founding of a strong, centralized union between the American states
In this passage, the author is arguing in favor of forming a more centrally controlled Federal union of the American states. He uses historical evidence from the experience of the confederacies of the Greeks to support their argument. The author proposes that the experience of the Greek states bear “a very instructive analogy to the present Confederation of the American States.” In particular, he focuses on the ways in which “the powers" of Greek states were divided, likening the Greek situation to "[the powers] of the present Congress, [...] administered by deputies appointed wholly by the cities in their political capacities; and exercised over them in the same capacities. Hence the weakness, the disorders, and finally the destruction of the confederacy."
The answer choice, “The Greeks were their own worst enemies, and in order to succeed as a nation, America must avoid the greed and corruption that marred ancient Greece” is a part of the overall argument, but is not the primary one. The key here is to understand the purpose of the argument, which is not to focus on the actual substance of the Greek states (this is a political document using a historical example, not a document focused on explicating history), but rather the applicability of the situation to current policy and principles in the formation of the United States. By starting with the blunt and oversimplified statement that "the Greeks were their own worst enemies" this answer choice fails to emphasize the primary focus and purpose of the political document at hand.
The answer choice that reads “Confederacies are always and inevitably going to fail” is too broad and is not as supported by direct evidence as is the correct answer, although the author would likely agree with this statement. It is important to note that answer choices will often include statements or principles with which the author of the passage would almost certainly agree. Do not be fooled! All correct answer choices will be supportable with direct textual evidence.
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