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Example Question #3712 : Sat Writing
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
One of Robert's role models is his father, a fireman, local hero, and small business owner, he started a popular clothing retail store.
owner who started
owner having started
owner, he started
owner, starting
owner, having started
owner who started
Grammatically, it is best to avoid use of verbs ending in "-ing" where they are not necessary. The correct answer avoids this by using the phrase "owner who started." It is also the most efficient (and least wordy) option.
Example Question #12 : Correcting Punctuation Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Although I was raised in an English-speaking household, I always found French and Spanish much more beautiful.
Although I was raised in an English-speaking household, I always found French and Spanish much more beautiful.
Although I, raised in an English-speaking household, always found French and Spanish much more beautiful.
Although I was always raised in an English-speaking household, found French and Spanish much more beautiful.
Although I was raised in an English-speaking household; I always found French and Spanish much more beautiful.
I was raised in an English-speaking household, I always found French and Spanish much more beautiful.
Although I was raised in an English-speaking household, I always found French and Spanish much more beautiful.
The original sentence contains a subordinate clause, "Although I was raised in an English-speaking household," and an independent clause, "I always found French and Spanish much more beautiful." Therefore the comma separating them is correct, and the sentence contains no error. The word "although," especially when used at the beginning of a sentence, is an easy marker for subordinate clauses.
Example Question #2 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Comma Splices
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
I find myself very drawn to the sea, I try to visit it often.
I find myself very drawn to the sea; I try to visit it often.
I find myself very drawn to the sea, I try to visit it often.
To find myself very drawn to the sea, I try to visit it often.
I find myself, and very drawn to the sea, so I try to visit it often.
I, finding myself very drawn to the sea, I try to visit it often.
I find myself very drawn to the sea; I try to visit it often.
In this question, the original sentence was actually formed by two independent clauses combined with a comma (a comma splice). In order to unite two independent clauses, either one clause must be subordinated, or stronger punctuation must be used. Only the correct answer choice connects the independent clauses with the correct punctuation, in this case, a semicolon.
Example Question #1 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas In Lists
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Angles, Jutes, and Saxons, were the dominant tribes that invaded Britain during that era.
Angles, Jutes, Saxons, were
Angles Jutes, and Saxons were
Angles, Jutes, and Saxons were
Angles Jutes Saxons were
Angles, Jutes, and Saxons, were
Angles, Jutes, and Saxons were
The list that forms the subject of the sentence, "Angles, Jutes, and Saxons," appropriately separates its items with commas. The comma between "Saxons" and "were" splits the subject of the sentence from the verb, and should be removed. This makes "Angles, Jutes, and Saxons were" the correct answer choice.
Example Question #1601 : Improving Sentences
Jane Sally and Suzy all went to the zoo together, making the experience one they all three would treasure.
Jane, Sally, and Suzy, all went to the zoo together
Jane Sally, and Suzy all went to the zoo together
Jane Sally and Suzy all went to the zoo together
Jane Sally and Suzy, all went to the zoo together
Jane, Sally, and Suzy all went to the zoo together
Jane, Sally, and Suzy all went to the zoo together
The list of names that forms the subject of the sentence is written incorrectly. All lists need to have commas separating their parts from each other for purposes of clarity. The correct answer choice is "Jane, Sally, and Suzy all went to the zoo together."
Example Question #3 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas
Tom Dick and Harry have all seen the problems with the newspaper's advertising strategy.
Tom, Dick, and Harry, have all seen
Tom Dick and Harry have all saw
Tom, Dick, and Harry have all seen
Tom Dick and Harry, have all seen
Tom Dick and Harry have all seen
Tom, Dick, and Harry have all seen
The list of names that make up the subjects of the sentence all need to be appropriately punctuated. Any such list needs have all the elements set apart from each other; therefore, "Tom, Dick, and Harry have all seen" is the correct answer.
Example Question #3 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas
Politicians organizers and reformers all came together to bring the initiative to the legislature.
Politicians organizers and reformers all came together
Politicians organizers and reformers, all came together
Politicians organizers and reformers all come together
Politicians, organizers, and reformers all came together
Politicians organizers and reformers have all come together
Politicians, organizers, and reformers all came together
The list that functions as the subject of the sentence needs to have commas separating its elements, distinguishing the different parts. The only answer choice that does this is "Politicians, organizers, and reformers all came together," making it the correct answer choice.
Example Question #2 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas In Lists
The issues to be discussed in the debate will be economics foreign policy and health care
economics; foreign policy; and health care.
economics foreign policy and health care.
economics, foreign policy, and health care.
economics foreign policy health care.
economics foreign policy, and health care.
economics, foreign policy, and health care.
A list like the one in the underlined portion of the sentence must always be appropriately separated out, especially when the elements of the list are two words, like "foreign policy." The only answer choice that clearly delineates the three component parts of the list is "economics, foreign policy, and health care."
Example Question #421 : Punctuation Errors
The athletes musicians, and actors all came together to help the charity raise money at the event.
The athletes, musicians, actors
The athletes musicians, and actors
The athletes musicians and actors
The athletes, musicians, and actors
The athlete's musician's and actor's
The athletes, musicians, and actors
Any list like the one used as the subject of the sentence needs to have its elements separated by commas to distinguish the separate parts. The only answer choice that appropriately does this is "The athletes, musicians, and actors," with every other answer choice being grammatically incorrect.
Example Question #2 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Rowing lacrosse and tennis are all sports that are growing in popularity.
Rowing lacrosse, and tennis are
Rowing, lacrosse, and tennis are
Rowing lacrosse and tennis is
Rowing lacrosse and tennis are
Rowing lacrosse, and tennis is
Rowing, lacrosse, and tennis are
A list like the one in the underlined portion of the sentence always needs to be separated by commas to clearly distinguish between the different elements in the list. The only answer choice that correctly does this is "Rowing, lacrosse, and tennis are," making it the correct answer choice.
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