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Example Question #1 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Harold had always found the specialized jargon of artisanal coffee shops being confusing and intimidating.
and
being
jargon of
No error
had always found
being
This sentence does not use the correct form of the verb that follows “found.” The corrected sentence reads: Harold had always found the specialized jargon of artisanal coffee shops to be confusing and intimidating.
Example Question #2 : Identifying Sentence Errors
His family grew up eating a steady diet of meat and potatoes, and now they are being reluctant to try new foods like enchiladas and kale chips.
like enchiladas and kale chips
steady diet
to try
are being
No error
are being
This sentence uses a clunky progressive tense when it is not needed. The corrected sentence reads: His family grew up eating a steady diet of meat and potatoes, and now they are reluctant to try new foods like enchiladas and kale chips.
Example Question #1 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
The new budget was not determined entirely by the Board of Directors, but they certainly had a lot of influence. No error
had
by
was not determined
No error
they
they
The correct answer is "they."
This is a case of subject-pronoun disagreement. Although the subject in the first clause is "the budget," the subject becomes "the Board of Directors" in the second clause. Therefore, the pronoun must be replacing that subject, and the subject is singular ("the Board of Directors"), while "they" is plural, so it is a definite error. While there are several people, at least more than one, in a Board of Directors, the subject is not the directors, it is the entity itself— the Board. There is only one Board.
Though "was not decided" is in the passive voice, it is not grammatically wrong, just weaker writing. "By" is the correct usage, "and had" is a verb-verb agreement, both are in past tense.
Example Question #1 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Lauren sulked all during school because she felt "left out," but the conversation was between Jenny and I, and I had every right to keep it that way. No error
No error
all during
"left out,"
keep it that way
between Jenny and I
between Jenny and I
"Between Jenny and I" is incorrect. In this case, the sentence should say, "Lauren sulked all during school because she felt 'left out,' but the conversation was between Jenny and me, and I had every right to keep it that way." This sentence has a pronoun case error. Since Jenny and the speaker are objects (grammatically) within the sentence, the objective case pronoun ("me") is required, instead of the subjective case pronoun ("I"). In order to better understand these situations, when the phrase includes a noun and a pronoun simply remove the noun before the pronoun, for example, remove "Jenny and." Once you do that, you will much more easily identify the correct pronoun.
Another example: "Dad bought Roger and I a bicycle." As opposed to: "Dad bought (Roger and) I a bicycle." One would not say: "Dad bought I a bicycle."
Example Question #1 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Members of the blue team travel around the city collecting buttons, and it will not be able to communicate with the red team at any time.
at any time
will not be able to
it
No error
collecting buttons
it
In this sentence, the pronoun “it” does not match in number with its antecedent “Members.” The corrected sentence reads: Members of the blue team travel around the city collecting buttons, and they will not be able to communicate with the red team at any time.
Example Question #1 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Susan's term paper was definitely the most thorough researched work she had done all year, but she was still worried that the teacher wouldn't like it. No error
was
it
she'd done
No error
most thorough
most thorough
The error here is "most thorough." Since "thorough" is followed by a verb it is an adverb, and thus must become "thoroughly." The correct way to write this would be "the most thoroughly researched." Adding the "-ly" to an adjective usually makes it an adverb, and every time and adjective is describing another adjective or a verb it must become an adverb. The "it" at the end is the correct pronoun, as "it" is referring to the paper.
Example Question #1 : Identifying Word Usage Errors
The lights were dimmed slow, and the crowd gasped when the blue glow of the painted letters became apparent.
became apparent
slow
No error
were dimmed
gasped
slow
This sentence uses the adjective “slow” to describe a the verb “were dimmed.” An adverb would be better. The corrected sentence reads: The lights were dimmed slowly, and the crowd gasped when the blue glow of the painted letters became apparent.
Example Question #1 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors
The sharp beak and beady eyes of a common farm chicken can be terrifying to those who have never seen this animal previous.
who
previous
can be terrifying
No error
sharp beak and beady eyes
previous
This sentence uses the adjective “previous” to describe the verb “seen.” An adverb would be better. The corrected sentence reads: The sharp beak and beady eyes of a common farm chicken can be terrifying to those who have never seen this animal previously.
Example Question #11 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
The comprehensive chemistry exam consists in four parts in which students must correctly identify the element or compound. No error
comprehensive
in
in which
No error
correctly identify
in
The correct preposition to use with the verb “to consist” is “of.” For example, “The Constitution consists of many sections.”
Example Question #1 : Identifying Word Usage Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
While his parents were at work, Michael skipped school and decided to take the train for the city, where he met his older brother Jimmy and some of Jimmy's friends. No error
While his parents
and some of Jimmy's
where
for
No error
for
"For" is a preposition error, as well as an idiom error. An idiomatic error is a grammatical error, but one that no longer has any logical explanation; it is simply the way we speak, or write in English. The correct preposition to substitute for would be "to." We take trains "to" cities, not "for" them. An idiosyncrasy is something unique or odd to a person that has no explanation. An idiopathic symptom, or illness, medically, is a condition with an unknown cause.
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